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== Copied from another wiki? == | == Copied from another wiki? == | ||
Hey guys, was the information on this page copied from another wiki? if so, is it bad enough that we need to tag it with: {{ | Hey guys, was the information on this page copied from another wiki? if so, is it bad enough that we need to tag it with: <nowiki>{{article-copied-from-another-wiki}}</nowiki>. {{User:Tacopill/sig}} 19:46, 13 August 2010 (PDT). | ||
:I checked Arwingpedia and Wikipedia, wasn't there a "Lylat wars" wiki as well? PureLocke([[User:PureLocke|User]]/[[User talk:PureLocke|Talk]]) 02:38, 14 August 2010 (PDT) | :I checked Arwingpedia and Wikipedia, wasn't there a "Lylat wars" wiki as well? PureLocke([[User:PureLocke|User]]/[[User talk:PureLocke|Talk]]) 02:38, 14 August 2010 (PDT) | ||
::If there was, i am not aware of it. Our current list of other wikis, as far as i know, is at {{ | ::If there was, i am not aware of it. Our current list of other wikis, as far as i know, is at {{t|External-links}}. {{User:Tacopill/sig}} 07:34, 14 August 2010 (PDT). | ||
:::Hello, I apologize for posting in an old section. This article ''does'' shares text with [http://wiki.starfox-online.net/index.php/Wolf_O%27Donnell this Wiki], at least in the "appearance" section. Most of it is even word-for-word. ([[User:Wolf O'Donnell|Wolf O'Donnell]] 22:33, 11 March 2011 (PST)) | :::Hello, I apologize for posting in an old section. This article ''does'' shares text with [http://wiki.starfox-online.net/index.php/Wolf_O%27Donnell this Wiki], at least in the "appearance" section. Most of it is even word-for-word. ([[User:Wolf O'Donnell|Wolf O'Donnell]] 22:33, 11 March 2011 (PST)) | ||
::::Thank you. Please remove the content, or if you are up to it, modify it enough that it is no longer a copy. {{User:Tacopill/sig}} 15:44, 12 March 2011 (PST). | ::::Thank you. Please remove the content, or if you are up to it, modify it enough that it is no longer a copy. {{User:Tacopill/sig}} 15:44, 12 March 2011 (PST). | ||
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::Those changes look a little better, but I believe that entire section should be rewritten. I'll try to do it but I only have Assault so it wouldn't be great. {{:User:Metroidking/sig}} 11:08, 13 March 2011 (PDT) | ::Those changes look a little better, but I believe that entire section should be rewritten. I'll try to do it but I only have Assault so it wouldn't be great. {{:User:Metroidking/sig}} 11:08, 13 March 2011 (PDT) | ||
:::I agree. It does look better. And you don't worry about not being able to do it all; it's why we are on a wiki, so many people can contribute in different ways, always attempting to make it better than it was. If one person can't do something in one area, then it can be taken care of by someone else at a later point. | |||
:::And you did fine with the tags. | |||
:::{{User:Tacopill/sig}} 12:56, 13 March 2011 (PDT). | |||
::::I'm saving the changes [[User:Metroidking/sandbox|here]] before I place them on the article. Any suggestions on what else to place? {{:User:Metroidking/sig}} 13:18, 14 March 2011 (PDT) | |||
:::::The only things I'd suggest are to remove both the mention of Leon as it's not that important and the idea that Wolf's design underwent a revision in ''Assault''. We never saw his body so mention something closer to Wolf's full body was seen for the first time in ''Assault''. I'd also suggest you throw in the comparison of Wario and Wolf I added. Mainly because Wario is a well known character, so comparing the two gives someone the idea of how Wolf acted in ''Command''.--[[User:TW|TW]] 12:49, 15 March 2011 (PDT) | |||
== Where should I put... == | |||
...his "biography" text from the official ''Assault'' Website? ([[User:Wolf O'Donnell|Wolf O'Donnell]] 21:10, 27 May 2011 (PDT)) | |||
:I would Try [[Wolf O'Donnell#In Game History]], just before the spoiler tag. {{User:Tacopill/sig}} 06:03, 29 May 2011 (PDT). | |||
== Criticism == | |||
Would it be appropriate to remove the criticism template? I thought the issue was fixed. ([[User:Wolf O'Donnell|Wolf O'Donnell]] ([[User talk:Wolf O'Donnell|talk]]) 23:27, 1 December 2012 (UTC)) | |||
:Do you know which issue was it marked on? {{User:Tacopill/sig}} 01:23, 4 December 2012 (UTC) | |||
::If I recall correctly, it was because of the ''Appearance and Personality'' section. At the time, it contained a lot of text from Arwingpedia. I'll have to double check before removing the template, but I do have a rewrite of the section in the works which I can put up for review... ([[User:Wolf O'Donnell|Wolf O'Donnell]] ([[User talk:Wolf O'Donnell|talk]]) 07:06, 4 December 2012 (UTC)) | |||
:::If you wish to do a redo, that would be cool. {{User:Tacopill/sig}} 01:18, 6 December 2012 (UTC) | |||
== Manual quote == | |||
If I may inquire, does the quote from the ''Assault'' manual look alright? The only reason I am asking is because I have the other character 'profiles' written in Word, and I want to make sure before adding them to their respective articles. ([[User:Wolf O'Donnell|Wolf O'Donnell]] ([[User talk:Wolf O'Donnell|talk]]) 09:26, 5 January 2013 (UTC)) | |||
:It looks good to me. {{User:Tacopill/sig}} 00:53, 7 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
