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Please forgive me for the sloppy look (of the preview? tag). I've never used it before... Regarding the article, I tried to modify most of the text in the appearance section, but I didn't change all of the wording. ([[User:Wolf O'Donnell|Wolf O'Donnell]] 22:09, 12 March 2011 (PST)) | Please forgive me for the sloppy look (of the preview? tag). I've never used it before... Regarding the article, I tried to modify most of the text in the appearance section, but I didn't change all of the wording. ([[User:Wolf O'Donnell|Wolf O'Donnell]] 22:09, 12 March 2011 (PST)) | ||
:I forgot to mention that I used a "grammar checker" and it appears that there are some embarrassing errors... I still have the modified text. ([[User:Wolf O'Donnell|Wolf O'Donnell]] 22:32, 12 March 2011 (PST)) | :I forgot to mention that I used a "grammar checker" and it appears that there are some embarrassing errors... I still have the modified text. ([[User:Wolf O'Donnell|Wolf O'Donnell]] 22:32, 12 March 2011 (PST)) | ||
::Those changes look a little better, but I believe that entire section should be rewritten. I'll try to do it but I only have Assault so it wouldn't be great. {{:User:Metroidking/sig}} 11:08, 13 March 2011 (PDT) |