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 :::::I've written the section, but I haven't posted it. I kind of wanted you to review it first, if you don't mind? [EDIT: Wrong section of talk page, I apologize.]([[User:Wolf O&#39;Donnell|Wolf O&#39;Donnell]] 21:16, 12 March 2011 (PST))
 ::::::Not a problem on either things. Just paste it here, between the &lt;pre> and </pre> tags.
+<pre>Wolf has gray and white fur that is clipped very close to  his head in a buzz cut fashion. Wolf has pointed gray ears with white  fur that ascend above his head. Wolf has purple colored eyes, and  usually glaring white eyebrows. Wolf is also of tall height, being  taller than most characters. Under  his white muzzle are his sharp white teeth. Wolf also has sharp claws,  of which Leon commented on. Wolf has a short white beard on his chin and  a rough gray tail which has a split at the tip. Wolf has gray and white  body fur, with white fur on his chest. Wolf has a very muscular build,  this, coupled with his size, makes him one of the strongest characters  in the series. In ''[[Star Fox 64]]'', he speaks with a voice  reminiscent of a British aristocrat.
+In  ''[[Star Fox: Assault]]'', he underwent a complete revision to his  design. He wore a black leather suit with purple markings, spiked  shoulder guards, a blue body vest, and had a gruffer voice. Perhaps one  of his most notable design changes was that he replaced his eyepatch  that he wore in ''Star Fox 64'' with a mechanical one.</pre>
+Please forgive me for the sloppy look (of the preview? tag). I've never used it before... Regarding the article, I tried to modify most of the text in the appearance section, but I didn't change all of the wording. ([[User:Wolf O&#39;Donnell|Wolf O&#39;Donnell]] 22:09, 12 March 2011 (PST))